I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Tuesday, 12 March 2013

SEASONS



IT IS REALLY HOT THE SUN IS SHINING THROUGH HUMANS SURROUNDING THE BEACH AND THE ROADS ARE MOUNTING THROUGH

THE COLD IS COMING THE FIRES ON THE FAMILY SHIVERING COLD WINTER

PLANTS GROW THE KIDS YELLING SCHOOL TIME SPRING

THE FRUIT YUMMY FRUIT NATURE IS HERE AND ITS A PRETTY COOL TIME ITS AUTUNM

1 comment:

  1. Hi Amara
    Thanks for your post. Remember when you write in all captial letters people think that you are shouting. I'm a bit sad to see that you didn't follow the instruction of using similes and metaphors in your post.


    Stephanie

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